The Sands of Dee
by
Charles Kingsley
"O Mary, go and call the cattle home,
The western tide crept up along the sand,
"Oh! is it weed, or fish, or floating hair--
They rowed her in across the rolling foam,
I remember the first time i read this poem. I was in the 8th std. and was to represent my school for a poetry recital competition.My english teacher,knowing well my capabilities,asked me to look up a poem myself. I rushed to the school library and being the library teacher's pet,she enthusiastically gave up her errand at hand and looked up the best books of poems we had.She selected the choicest few and handed them to me. I poured myself into the books and set upon finding myself a poem that would make me stand out among the rest. I must have read about a 50 poems including a lot of William Wordsworth,John Keating, and the likes.And then i happened to read "Sands of Dee" by Charles Kingsley. I liked the poem for its uniqueness but mostly because it was by a poet not many 13 year olds would chose.and in that it suited my criteria of looking for something different.i showed the poem to my teacher who asked me to settle for something i could do justice to. she said this was a piece of work that had to be understood , the pain had to be felt, the melancholy ,the sadness would have to be delivered perfectly thru' the poem. But i was relentless. And she was a good teacher.Together we set upon perfecting the deliverence of this masterpiece. And deliver, i did. Right down to just that one tear that flowed from the corner of my eye at the right time! And the inter-school poetry recital trophy was ours! What jubiliations,what adulations and what praises were bestowed on me. It was unanimously declared that to give a rendition such that i had at the age that i was ,was indeed a masterpiece by itself. i felt like a queen that day as i held that trophy.Nothing else mattered.
4 comments:
If you read this post in one of the prose elocution competitions...you would still win :).....superb...it was a very personal incident that you were reminiscing and feeding to the keyboard...but the genius in it is that this is the kind of story that without fail gets people to become all nostalgic over their own school years...Its the kind of writing that demands attention by taking one into an emotional journey of their own in the past and that is why it is a winner. The proof of that is my overindulgence in narrating the entire of my school life to my friends in our daily e-mail sessions. You know where to verify that from....you ROCK!!
I am a 7th grade student from a small state in India, also preparing the same poem for
the district poetry competition.I was attracted by the poem,just like you.But as I began learning it,I felt it was a difficult for me to express.But after reading this,I feel like I can do it.I just needed a good boost and your blog was just what I wanted.Thanks awfully.You are the best.
iam reading this presently in class 6
This poem was the very first poem that I ever recited in school or anywhere for a competition. I was in second grade and my aunt had helped me prepare. I still remember, back then all I knew about the poem was that a pretty girl drowned and that people can still hear her call the cattle home. I quite forgot it until a week ago when I helped my own teacher's daughter prepare this same poem for her recitation competition in the same school I studied in. And when I read this poem the first time in a lot of years, it just felt right. The intense emotions it conveys, the ending note...its all very strong and I am glad to see someone write about it.
I liked your blog quite a lot.
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